വ്യാഴാഴ്‌ച, ജൂൺ 27, 2013

An attempt to write a poem


At the millennium training, I tried to write a poem. I think it can be used as an additional  reading material for  UP students.
 CLICK HERE FOR THAT POEM - To My Daughters

 Suja Ramesh
LPSA, GTWLPS Nadupathy, Palakkad

4 അഭിപ്രായങ്ങൾ:

MUHAMMED DILKUSH MP പറഞ്ഞു...

MADNESS
Like a mad dog
he barks
like a mad monkey
he climbs
like a mad girl
he dance
like a mad duck
he eat
barks,climbs,dance
make us mad

Vadayakkandy പറഞ്ഞു...

'he dances','he eats'

Suja Ramesh പറഞ്ഞു...

Funny rhyme by Mr. Muhammed dilkush MP. and useful editing by Mr.Vadyakkandy. This is the way we should respond and develop this blog.

rajeev joseph പറഞ്ഞു...

Dear Muhammed Dilkush. Please note the editing by Vadayakkandy. Since 'he' is a singualr subject the verb following it will also be a singular one. Thus it becomes ' he eats', 'he dances' and 'dances'

Nice poem.